Explanation Writing – Ice Cream in a Bag

Today we wrapped up our Explanation Writing unit by making ice cream in a bag. After we had finished making and trying the ice cream we spent some time to write out the process. Check out our writing below

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  1. Very clear explanations of how to make ice cream Ruma Tekau. I used to not enjoy writing explanations as I could not use adjectives and they seemed to lack life. I am intrigued by Neihana’s title using the word ‘insulting.’ Why was it insulting? That could be a great writing challenge – either writing a description of the ice cream or changing the wonderfully clear instructions you have given to insults… that could create some mayhem.

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